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Help a Royal Oak High Student Win a College Scholarship

Vote now for Omar Romolino's essay.

A Royal Oak High senior has entered an essay on the website WyzAnt that could win him the top prize - a $10,000 college scholarship.

Omar Romolino needs your help.

Omar, the only entrant from Royal Oak, answered the essay question is "If you could teach everyone in the world one thing, what would it be?" He has received more than 600 votes so far.

Read Omar's essay and vote here.

Scholarship finalists will be determined by popular vote. The 10 top ranking essays will advance to the second round, which runs through May 1, according to the website.

First place will receive a $10,000 college scholarship, second place will receive a $3,000 college scholarship, and third place will receive a $2,000 scholarship. Each scholarship will be paid directly to the scholarship recipient's college or university.

Omar is in the drama club at Royal Oak High School and is also in the choir.  He has been accepted to the College for Creative Studies and will be attending there starting in the fall.

Elizabeth March 03, 2014 at 08:42 AM
This essay is terrible! The sentence structure is awful and the basic use of the English language is slaughtered throughout the entire essay. Submitting the essay as a poem might have been a better choice. If this is a representation of the Royal Oak schools, then the English program needs a major overhaul.
Sam March 03, 2014 at 09:33 PM
Its a bit of experimental syntax, as well the essay doesn't matter because the contest is popularity based. As well, I'm sure the student never expected it to come this far. One of the essays on the leader boards is about petting dogs for crying out loud. There's no need to be so offended and the votes are anonymous so you're identity would be hidden, maybe then you could stomach the shame of getting a kid into the college of their dreams. Its less about the essay and more about a community coming together to support one of their own. If there was a way to reenter then yes there would a be point in complaining but there isn't. I see potential in the writing, I'm sure this kid is capable of much more than what you give them credit for.

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